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A small victory for plain English

16 September 2008

Tesco, the British supermarket chain, has bowed to grammatical pressure and decided to correct the signs in its stores which indicate service for customers with “ten items or less”.

According to most guidelines on English grammar and usage, the correct form is “ten items or fewer”. However, many people consider this quite clumsy and not in common use, so Tesco has sidestepped the problem by rewording the signs to say “up to 10 items”:

From now on, signs in new stores are to say “up to 10 items” after a long running argument with those who have objected to the use of the word “less” in that context.

Many have argued that the signs ought to read “ten items or fewer” instead of “ten items or less”. Their argument is that the word ‘fewer’ should be used when it refers to quantities that can be counted. ‘Less’, they say, should refer to quantities that cannot be counted.

The new form of words comes from a suggestion by the Plain English Campaign.

I’m a big fan of plain English, after having read the Australian Government Style manual, which mandates it. The clean style of choosing the shortest words and clearest sentence forms makes a refreshing change to many documents.

 
Posted by Shannon at 2008-09-16 22:22:53
This post is double plus good

:-)
 
Posted by Matt Ryall at 2008-09-17 22:31:10
Shannon, thanks for the comment. :)

However, I think you might be mistaken in thinking plain English has something to do with George Orwell’s Newspeak. This isn’t the case. Have a read of the Wikipedia article on plain English. It has a good overview of the writing style.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plain_English

Newspeak was (fictitiously) simplified so as to deceive or restrict the concepts that could be communicated. By contrast, plain English strives to simplify to improve communication.

Although “plain English” as an term arrived long after Orwell, he was a strong voice in favour of simplifying written English in the 1940s. His famous essay, Politics and the English Language, is a favourite of mine:

http://www.calvinvanhoek.com/articles/2007/04/politics-english-language/
 
Posted by Sarah at 2008-09-25 08:48:35
Let’s tell the ABC that “Hollow Men” should be two words not one ;)
 
Posted by Limbic~Region at 2008-11-05 06:16:38
I took Shannon’s comment to mean

Matt++

As in increment your karma rating

As in a complement an no reference to Newspeak at all
 

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